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Ashfur Broken Glass Test

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Trying out a broken glass effect ^-^
I think Flighty is the original person who did it... or something
But idk
Is it good?
Do you think I should have/ shouldn't have put that transparent glass over it?
...
You know what I'll just have a critique
And yes
Simple BG because this was a test and it looks nice with it so yeah...

Enjoy!
~Swift

Art- Me
Ashfur- Erin Hunter
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Amazing, bro. I love it. It visions how much ashfurs life is like cracked glass. How his world shattered all in different times- It was depressing. It was amusing how lionblaze was his apprentice- being his lost-loves thought-to-be-child and all. The countless times he'd tried to kill and break apart the three brought up who he was. Now to the pro's and con's.

The pros are...
Nice effects.
The eyes are good, and I like how the spots arent all black.
The paws look like actual paws.

The cons are...
This picture lacks shading.
His tail isnt the most even- It looks good- but it is a little fat.